When describing your work experience or training, you should focus on your achievements and what you gained from the experience. The following description of a job applicant’s work experience does not do this. It is simply a list of duties. Re-write
the information below in a more formal way, adding your own ideas and focusing on the positive outcomes.
1) March 2020 - present
MechCo Ltd, UK - Junior Mechanical Engineer
doing some mechanical construction drawings for people in the electrical design team
helping my boss
helping some important people with designing and developing power equipment and systems
writing some technical rules for using systems and technical reports
putting together some manuals and writing some instructions on how to operate stuff.
2) Sept 2019 – Feb 2020
Ruddlings Ltd, UK – Graduate Trainee
helped with paperwork
followed project managers and designers around to see what they were doing
learned about how buildings are heated and ventilated
went to lots of meetings with different teams like architects, contractors, and fire consultants